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jus undrstnd ur not gonna

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PostSubject: Falling   Falling EmptySun Sep 28, 2008 4:20 pm

Falling
She puts on her pretty white dress
And magically turns into a princess
Dancing around the room, turning down imaginary courtiers
Looking for her prince charming…

He’s never there.
He’s always with her.
The girl of his dreams
Across the hallway, smiling
They hold hands
He kisses her when they think no ones watching
But she’s always watching

It hurts
It’s eating away at her insides
She tries all kinds of things to rid herself of this thing…
And some of them work.
For a little while
But the pain always comes back…
Always comes back

Like a vulture circling its weak victim
It waits until she’s at her lowest,
All alone, in the darkness
Then it attacks
It tells her all kinds of lies
How she’s never good enough
And always letting people down

It hurts….
It hurts….

She tries to cry herself to sleep…
But it’s no use.
She’s cried herself dry.

No more tears to fall...
She fills her glass
To make the pain stop
To make the tears fall
And nobody knows
Nobody knows
She’s falling...
Failing…
Falling apart
7/16/08
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PostSubject: Re: Falling   Falling EmptySun Sep 28, 2008 9:22 pm

wow. that's great.
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PostSubject: Re: Falling   Falling EmptyWed Oct 01, 2008 6:01 pm

psh. and again i say. psh.
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PostSubject: Re: Falling   Falling EmptyWed Oct 01, 2008 10:48 pm

And who are you to "psh" Donna. I have to say it's good, but not that original.
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PostSubject: Re: Falling   Falling EmptyWed Oct 01, 2008 11:18 pm

whoo! i'm un'psh'able! that totally made my day!

it's great.

and you can't 'psh' that.
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PostSubject: Re: Falling   Falling EmptyThu Oct 02, 2008 10:29 am

ha. my bad. i don't really know any of you.... so who are you? i must know who i am "psh"-ing. you've got me all curious now.... glad i could be part of the making of your day btw.
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PostSubject: Re: Falling   Falling EmptyFri Oct 03, 2008 6:12 pm

Well She's Donna and I'm Kevin. I've been sorta neglecting my duties as welcome but my dad unconsiously blocked this site and It's not like I can tell him he did.
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PostSubject: Re: Falling   Falling EmptySat Oct 04, 2008 6:40 pm

a lot of parents don't like us being on the site because when it was new we got in some trouble for it.

anyways...

like he said, im donna...hmmm what to tell you...

oh! i'm weird.

you have been warned.
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PostSubject: Re: Falling   Falling EmptySat Oct 04, 2008 8:07 pm

She's also blond and that doesn't help.

Oh god the first site was disaster.

One, Mike created (correct me if i'm wrong) On school computer. And addedand edited stuff. We, who joined the site, got on at school and posted stuff and wrote stuff abut teachers and pranks and general bad and emo stuff.
Then this is what rteally pissed us off. They took Lance, who joined the site but idn't posts anything, made him go the office, go to the site, and point everyone else out. The site crashed after that and we made a new one, then this one. All ouir parents were called. I actually didn't get in too much trouble because my dad just asked me about it an d I lied off my ass. Lance got supergrounded and counseling. The rest IDK.
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PostSubject: Re: Falling   Falling EmptySun Oct 05, 2008 12:28 am

Let me clarify the shaky points. I (Mike) didn't actually create it on the school computer I created it at school.. Apparently someone let slip that there was a site.. I've yet to figure out who it was though....
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PostSubject: Re: Falling   Falling EmptySun Oct 05, 2008 10:59 am

now tori gets it.
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PostSubject: Re: Falling   Falling EmptySun Oct 05, 2008 4:10 pm

xXyour lost heroXx wrote:
Let me clarify the shaky points. I (Mike) didn't actually create it on the school computer I created it at school.. Apparently someone let slip that there was a site.. I've yet to figure out who it was though....

Mike...You do realize the school was tracking us through our log-ins. They can keep track of any site we go to even if we delete or history. Oh and this year at the GBHS, every time we hit a block site, it records somewhere, we hit the wrong block site, we get busted. No one h ad to tell, the shcool system just has to track you through your log-in.
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PostSubject: Re: Falling   Falling EmptyMon Oct 06, 2008 10:32 am

ah.. i understand. kinda. well... i'm on at school.. but not at GB.. so... i think i'm alright. this school.. ha. catching anything? ha. anyways.. we have donna kevin mike and tori... and darren..... well and me... Katelyn... who am i missing??
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PostSubject: Re: Falling   Falling EmptyWed Oct 08, 2008 7:11 pm

ha! didn't you know that sites like these are scanned by police? and when johnny posted that stupid poem about shit, they caught on and turned us in to the school.

and i think that's all of us.
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PostSubject: Re: Falling   Falling EmptySat Nov 01, 2008 6:37 pm

Well Maybe. But Lance's trip to the Principals office didn't halt shit.
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PostSubject: Re: Falling   Falling EmptySat Nov 01, 2008 7:39 pm

heeheehee that 's called constipation.

sorry that was just too tempting.
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PostSubject: Re: Falling   Falling EmptyTue Nov 04, 2008 10:44 pm

nope.
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PostSubject: Re: Falling   Falling EmptyThu Nov 06, 2008 7:49 pm

Well It hsould be help.

It should sya lances trip didn't help anything
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