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PostSubject: smile.   Sun Jun 06, 2010 5:15 pm

My friends look away
As we walk through the hall
They know they shouldn’t see
Me in your presence at all

It’s taken some time
But we’ve finally agreed
That it’s best if we’re separated,
You and me.

I know you like to make it out to something
But don’t kid yourself.
This isn’t love.
I just want to make you smile.


Yellow is the original. I don't like the rest.
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PostSubject: Re: smile.   Mon Jun 07, 2010 11:45 pm

i like it.
though it's kinda confusing(:
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PostSubject: Re: smile.   Tue Jun 08, 2010 5:42 pm

XD that's alright.
thanks love.
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PostSubject: Re: smile.   Fri Jun 11, 2010 5:18 pm

It's not confusing, it just makes sense to a degree. Razz

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PostSubject: Re: smile.   Fri Jun 18, 2010 5:21 pm

Well... Thank you?
It made me feel better, in any case.
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PostSubject: Re: smile.   Sat Jun 19, 2010 8:54 pm

That's always a plus

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PostSubject: Re: smile.   Mon Jun 21, 2010 9:21 am

exactly.

ANYWAY;;
what've you been up to lately?
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PostSubject: Re: smile.   Tue Jun 22, 2010 12:42 am

Getting my online life back together. Letting Rogue Galaxy be my Pimp 3:

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PostSubject: Re: smile.   Tue Jun 22, 2010 6:23 pm

Ah. Sweet action? XD
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PostSubject: Re: smile.   Fri Jun 25, 2010 12:34 pm

Only if video games could do that. Well then actually, video game berzerks would never come out of their rooms.

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PostSubject: Re: smile.   Fri Jun 25, 2010 9:22 pm

Surprise! Guess who's back. I miss you guys . . .

I like this poem. I needed sunglasses to read the yellow, though. Bright, bright yellow.

Good poem!

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PostSubject: Re: smile.   Sat Jun 26, 2010 9:11 am

Awh!! Thanks Donna!
And XD!!! I just realized the inappropriatness of that. Teeheehee.
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PostSubject: Re: smile.   Fri Jul 02, 2010 12:29 am

?

Hi missy. Where have you been hiding this summer?

Ohohoh. I have license now!

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PostSubject: Re: smile.   Sat Jul 03, 2010 10:48 am

Awesome!
(I wanna know the answer to that question too, by the way)
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