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PostSubject: Memories.   Mon Feb 16, 2009 6:39 pm

It was crushing her,
constricting every internal organ,
most of all her heart.

The pictures,
racing through her mind,
blinding her.

She was feeling the sensation of drowning,
falling deeper and deeper,
into the darkness she felt.

Her false sense of safety,
disintegrating,
withering,
disappearing.

His voice was in her ear,
saying all the things she didn't want to hear,
telling her all the lies he had ever said,
all the false promises he had made.

His face was all around,
burning into her,
crushing her,
killing her.

She missed him.
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PostSubject: Re: Memories.   Mon Feb 16, 2009 6:52 pm

wow. intense. loved it.
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PostSubject: Re: Memories.   Mon Feb 16, 2009 9:53 pm

Very. It was good. I was expecting more though.

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PostSubject: Re: Memories.   Tue Feb 17, 2009 10:20 pm

more... more.. more what?
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PostSubject: Re: Memories.   Wed Feb 18, 2009 11:01 pm

geez, kevin! shut yo mouth!

it was very very good.

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PostSubject: Re: Memories.   Wed Feb 18, 2009 11:03 pm

and there you have it. Donna's opinion.
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PostSubject: Re: Memories.   Thu Feb 19, 2009 6:14 pm

I don't know Katelyn. Just more.

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PostSubject: Re: Memories.   Sat Feb 21, 2009 12:31 am

hmmm.... where do you find more...
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PostSubject: Re: Memories.   Sat Feb 28, 2009 9:15 pm

i know what kevin's insinuating..
's all good.
no need to yell at him.
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