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sweet pea :P




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Join date : 2008-09-08

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PostSubject: Deep Inside   Deep Inside EmptyTue Sep 09, 2008 5:28 pm

If you look at me, i look fine!
Like the sun shines!
But deep inside lies the truth.
All the hurt, abuse and the death.
If you look at my wrists, they will tell you the truth,
If you look in my heart you will see the same,
My wrists will heal,
My heart will not,

I'll try to forgive and forget,
It wont be easy,
I'm not even sure i can,
The words i'm speaking are the truth,

Plz don't judge me, for the thing's that have happened to me it's not my fault that thies thing's went down!
It's your fault that they have stayed in my life you sat there and just criticized me for what you did to me, why is it so hard to admit to what you did,
i know you did it, and you do to you just don't want to have to go away!
Well i don't care anymore, i just want you to leave me the H**l alone!

I hate that you were my cuzin that just makes it worse!!!

Sweet Pea :/
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The Challenged


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Join date : 2008-03-27
Age : 30
Location : In my corner, or at work (exerting energy sucks)

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PostSubject: Re: Deep Inside   Deep Inside EmptyWed Sep 10, 2008 2:22 am

over here we arent that judgemental
were probably one of the un judging peple that willl help you to be a stronger less hurt you
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Punkette




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Join date : 2008-03-09
Age : 29

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PostSubject: Re: Deep Inside   Deep Inside EmptyWed Sep 10, 2008 4:37 pm

totally. good poem, too. i'm donna, the wanna-be-a-phychiactrist dude is darren. welcome to the site =)
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Abhorsen
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Join date : 2008-03-19
Age : 30
Location : I don't know anymore.

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PostSubject: Re: Deep Inside   Deep Inside EmptyWed Oct 01, 2008 10:50 pm

Pretty Good. I'm Kevin. Since My parent's unknowingly blocked this site I randomly show up.
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