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PostSubject: Dancing In The Rain   Fri May 23, 2008 9:36 am

The clouds are crying
out for you
the rain is falling
fast and blue
the puddles on the ground
shimmer in my sight
I dance in the rain
on this dark, cold night
enjoying the water
as I ignore the pain
forgetting it all
as I twirl it away
I must be a sight
all covered with wet
but I ignore the stares
instead, I just forget
forgetting the broken promises
all the fakes and the lies
the stories of heartbreak
of love and demise
I need a break
from all this hate
from the world of doom
the cloak of gloom
that we weave around ourselves so tight
it clings to us
all day and night
my hair is soaked
my eyes are red
I might be crying
so sick from dread
lighting flashes
thunder booms
the world's a glow
as more storms bloom
sometimes rain is all I need
heavy falling water
with a light breeze
to blow away my troubles
for a minute, or a year
and instead i can imagine
the good things that are true
and as I'm dancing there alone
I dream that I'm with you

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PostSubject: Re: Dancing In The Rain   Sun Jan 04, 2009 1:00 am

wow. i remember exactly when i wrote that.

i almost started crying.

- this is what i get for reading my old poems.

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PostSubject: Re: Dancing In The Rain   Sun Jan 04, 2009 5:59 pm

wow. that's awesome.

i wish i could write poems with short lines...
they always end up like full sentances.

it irks me.
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PostSubject: Re: Dancing In The Rain   Mon Jan 05, 2009 12:29 am

lol i'm sorry

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PostSubject: Re: Dancing In The Rain   Mon Jan 05, 2009 10:35 am

haha it's fine.

that was really a compliment to you that jus kinda turned into
un-copmlimenting myself.
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PostSubject: Re: Dancing In The Rain   Mon Jan 05, 2009 2:53 pm

oh-kay!!!

i do that sometimes (a lot) too

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PostSubject: Re: Dancing In The Rain   Mon Jan 05, 2009 4:23 pm

haha.
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PostSubject: Re: Dancing In The Rain   Tue Jan 06, 2009 5:56 pm

Dark Poems are fine.

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PostSubject: Re: Dancing In The Rain   Tue Jan 06, 2009 10:30 pm

i never said they weren't fine; i just said that reading mine was kind of depressing.

i'm glad i got over all that shit. it was not a fun time.

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PostSubject: Re: Dancing In The Rain   Wed Jan 07, 2009 6:02 pm

knowing of the feeling... kinda.

ok, probably not. but.... yeah.
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